Arnauld M Sawuna
January 23.2013
English 112
Ms. Germaine-Christine
There are many types of health care issue
that affect people globally, on the news reports million dying each year from
non communicable diseases such as cancer. There are several types of cancers
which affect women. These include ovarian cancer, uterine cancer, breast
cancer, fallopian cancer, vaginal cancer, and vulvar cancer. There are various
factors that need to be taken into consideration about cancers that women need
to be aware of. These include their family history, ethnicity, age and
lifestyles for example. All women should be aware of their risk for developing
cancer as it can affect women of every age, race and ethnic group. Having the
awareness of your risks is very beneficial.
This was the diagnosis of stage four cancers that affected my grandma and there was nothing that the doctors could do. The next question my grandfather had was, “How long?” The doctor said, “Less than ninety days,” due to the fact that the cancer had eaten its way through her bladder. This is the most serious illness that I have had to deal with it, was truly hard on me and a lot of my family members; since he and grandma would have been married more than thirty years.
My question was, “Okay, do we tell her or just let everything seem as if it all going to be alright?” We just wanted grandma to be happy and not in any pain. So, we decided not to tell her that she was dying, just to take it one day at a time. After, that I took a month off from work to spend time with my grandma not knowing when or if I was going to be able to handle it when she did pass. During this time off from work I would take her out to eat and shopping just to have that time to myself with her. She was so excited just to get out ever though it would wear her out being out and trying to walk. Grandma would never let us know that she was in pain or needed something for the pain.
The day came when we had to put her in the nursing home due to her needing around the clock care; just the thought of her not being in the same house without her there was lonely. When took her to her room. She just looked at the walls shaking her head saying “this is not like home”. We told her “Grandma, we can make it look just like your room at home, by putting pictures on the walls and flowers in the room.” After, we got a few of her things in there it did make her smile just the thought of her being happy was the main thing.
Sadly, the tragic day came when I went to the nursing home and the CNA’s were outside to Grandma’s room. I asked “if they were getting ready to give her at bath or something?” They would not answer me, just then the nurse came out and told me that mom was gasping and that she could die at any time.
In conclusion knowing someone who has suffer from cancer can have a very emotional as affect. This disease impact everyone in my family it brought us together closer as a family. It has taught me how to be stronger and supportive. It looks at health issues differently because so many innocent people are victims.
The parts that I bolded, those are my revisions of your words, and the parts that are crossed out, those were your words that I needed
to be edited. The parts that are in red are my comments to something you have written. It's sounds fine after you make these changes.
This was the diagnosis of stage four cancers that affected my grandma and there was nothing that the doctors could do. The next question my grandfather had was, “How long?” The doctor said, “Less than ninety days,” due to the fact that the cancer had eaten its way through her bladder. This is the most serious illness that I have had to deal with it, was truly hard on me and a lot of my family members; since he and grandma would have been married more than thirty years.
My question was, “Okay, do we tell her or just let everything seem as if it all going to be alright?” We just wanted grandma to be happy and not in any pain. So, we decided not to tell her that she was dying, just to take it one day at a time. After, that I took a month off from work to spend time with my grandma not knowing when or if I was going to be able to handle it when she did pass. During this time off from work I would take her out to eat and shopping just to have that time to myself with her. She was so excited just to get out ever though it would wear her out being out and trying to walk. Grandma would never let us know that she was in pain or needed something for the pain.
The day came when we had to put her in the nursing home due to her needing around the clock care; just the thought of her not being in the same house without her there was lonely. When took her to her room. She just looked at the walls shaking her head saying “this is not like home”. We told her “Grandma, we can make it look just like your room at home, by putting pictures on the walls and flowers in the room.” After, we got a few of her things in there it did make her smile just the thought of her being happy was the main thing.
Sadly, the tragic day came when I went to the nursing home and the CNA’s were outside to Grandma’s room. I asked “if they were getting ready to give her at bath or something?” They would not answer me, just then the nurse came out and told me that mom was gasping and that she could die at any time.
In conclusion knowing someone who has suffer from cancer can have a very emotional as affect. This disease impact everyone in my family it brought us together closer as a family. It has taught me how to be stronger and supportive. It looks at health issues differently because so many innocent people are victims.
The parts that I bolded, those are my revisions of your words, and the parts that are crossed out, those were your words that I needed
to be edited. The parts that are in red are my comments to something you have written. It's sounds fine after you make these changes.